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Wow.. not much to say here.. I found out about this place from my friend rundineko.
I dont know when I will upload anything here.. I have a DA account undder the same name as I have here..

my art is really lacking but I do put my heart into it

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*SIGHS*.. posted Mar 18th 2005, 4:27AM
Mood: DejectedMusic: Nightfall- Blind Guardian
Got rejected from a furry art site I wanted to join...

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"Firstly, its not necessary to use mature artwork as samples. We don't REQUIRE that artists draw mature work, here (Contrary to some people's beliefs!)

Unfortuantely, I feel that your work, in terms of artistic maturity, is not quite yet to our requirements. I'll go through what I feel needs to be worked on, plus a few presentation issues that you'll need to address for when you're ready to re-apply later on.

In 'elenorandhcrystal' the proportions of her legs are a little off.

'yellowcoyote' also has problems with proportions, and her hand structure is very basic

'eleanor' isn't too bad, but this, as well as the others, has very wobbly lines, making me think you're very, very carefully trying to trace a line over your sketchwork, showing that you're not really comfortable with it just yet.

In all three cases, you're hands and feet are either hidden (very common with beginner artwork - hands and feet are hard) or not well structured.

So... what I recommend is that you continue to practise proportions and musculature over well-proportioned skeletons. Consider using building blocks, or the stick and ball method, to build up a basic structure before laying over skin and muscles. Get some good instructional books, and we have a few here: Beginner Recommendations.

With a few months solid practise, a couple of drawings a day, you should be fine! Just work on line work, don't spend time colouring until your base drawings are good. Good colouring won't fix bad drawings

On the presentation issues, 'yellowcoyote' has a very lightly tinted background, which doesn't look intentional. The Levels Tool can address this one pretty well.

So... please continue with your practise... do it every day. Good luck! (But luck has nothing to do with it ) "

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Kinda stung a bit cause even though I haven't been drawing furry long, I HAVE been drawing for a few years now and constantly trying to improve.
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  • 'Vegeta and Dodoria' by Kaia
  • 'Appointment for FETISH' by touzoku joou

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ljeffrey Says: (May 18th 2005, 5:58PM)
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HI!!! *waves* found'cha!
touzoku joou Says: (Jan 21st 2005, 6:23AM)
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n_n Thank you for the !
kali Says: (Jan 19th 2005, 5:54AM)
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

*insert stalkage*
rundineko Says: (Jan 14th 2005, 8:23PM)
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Mrah! *loves*
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